Mateo's logline reads: "A boy fixes a bike." His teacher says it does not yet show why the story matters. What is the logline still missing?

Liza's storyboard panel shows her main character far down a long, empty corridor, filling very little of the frame. What does this framing carry to the viewer?

Before shooting, Rina writes: "I want viewers to see that my grandmother's weaving is work, not decoration." What has Rina put on paper?

Two plans for a film about a fishing town. Plan A: sunsets, boats and smiling faces under music. Plan B: one fisher whose catch shrinks each year. Which plan shows the town's culture better?

Ana's scenes are in an order that makes sense, but every cut lands hard and the sound stops dead between shots. Which quality does her draft still lack?

Paolo's cuts are smooth and his music runs right through, but the film ends before viewers ever learn why the boy left home. Which quality does the draft lack?

Dana's film opens with the narration, "Why does the jeepney line start at four in the morning?" By the final shot the film has never said. What should her revision do?

Kim's storyboard panel is a rough drawing of a classroom with nothing written beside it. What note would make the panel useful on shooting day?

Bea's scene is about a father counting coins for a fare. Her panel shows a close view of his hands and the coins on his palm. Why does this frame carry the moment?

Noel wants viewers to notice a small crack in a jar. His panel draws the whole kitchen with the jar on a far shelf. What is wrong with the frame?

Grace writes her plan as "My film is about garbage." Her teacher says that is a subject, not yet a purpose. Which line states a purpose?

Ruel's film is about a quiet market slowly waking up. He plans loud pop music over every single shot. Why does that plan weaken the film?

Jen's narration says, "The road floods every June." The shot under it shows a dry road on a bright, sunny day. What should she change?

A storyboard is drawn before shooting so a class can see whether each planned frame carries the information that moment needs.

Ivan storyboards his film to open on a boy already running late, and to show only afterward why he is running. Why can that opening work?

Mia cuts from a shot of a bell being rung to a shot of students standing up. Why do the two shots feel connected?

Carla lists her scenes: (1) she wins the race, (2) she trains at dawn, (3) she joins the team, (4) she is told she is too slow. She wants to show doubt turning into work. Which order serves that?

Ben's panel shows only a girl's face as she hears the results. Her cheering classmates are kept outside the frame. What does that choice do?

Ellen's subject is "the history of farming in the Philippines." Her teacher says a short film cannot hold it. Which narrower subject keeps her meaning?

Dante's purpose changes from "show how loud the market is" to "show how a vendor rests between customers." What must he revise in his storyboard first?